Never-ending Thoughts
My thoughts are many, but fragments;
Each one not making any sense on its own.
Haven’t quite figured out how to put all the pieces together;
Perhaps…no, that would be the easy way out.
Each end looking for a beginning;
Each beginning keeps starting over.
Is it the past merely repeating itself?
Or is it trying to teach a lesson that can’t be learned?
The answer is somewhere between the beginning and the end.
Because the end, ultimately, is death.
I love this!! Mash’Allah beautifully written
Thanks this is about me dealing with my bipolar disorder
Officially my favourite now from your works… A lot more to contemplate with this even though it seemed simple and straight to the point.
Yes glad you like it
I agree with farah! So far my favorite piece. This line resonates so well with me
Each end looking for a beginning;
Our thoughts are really jumbled in our head, partly because we are women and then todays world keeps on making you lose focus
Yes it’s so easy to get jumbled thoughts
Maybe because we are unable to direct thoughts? I am thinking about learning to focus maybe this will make us more productive and coherent
It’s a lot harder to un-jumble thoughts when in the mist of having a bipolar episode , this is something I have always struggled with
Have you just tried writing them out unedited let the words flow out as fast as you can write this might help calm your mind, it’s worth a try
Yes I have and it just leaves me with pages and pages of words that don’t make much sense
Yes that sometimes happens and other times you get some really good written words
Thanks good advice
Each end looking for a beginning;
Each beginning keeps starting over….though these lines sound simple…they carry heavy meaning….you have that zing to play with words…keep going…
Thanks
Sometimes some answers are completely elusive. Lovely poem, straight and to the point
Thanks
I really like this one. Most people would connect easily to it. “The end ultimately is death”…this is deep. Welldone sis.
Thanks glad you enjoyed reading this
Death is indeed the ultimate phase of our lives. I hope it’s peaceful for everyone and no one dies in pain.
Yes in sha Allah
I’m so intrigued as to what you were thinking when you wrote ‘Perhaps ….’ – what your solution was – you don’t have to answer ofcourse 🙂
No I don’t have a solution which is why I write about it
Maa shaa Allah sis always beautiful words. Something I love about your poems is they are short and simple yet have such deep meanings to ponder over.
Thanks , not all are short but most are . Glad you enjoyed reading this poem
Oh my God this is my favorite one❤
It’s simple plus deep as well.
Enjoyed reading it as always đź’•