They Slew Me
They tore out my heart,
These demons of discord and malice.
They feasted on it,
Those demons of hatred and spite.
I had no chance,
Not a prayer,
I didn’t even resist.
And this life it keeps going,
And I can never stop it.
Everyday,
One more day,
I live to rue my existence.
I can’t deny,
I’ve had a hand in my own demise.
It’s so unfair,
I was so young.
Despite even that and my innocence,
They slew me anyway.
So lays my slain body,
Fallen to the ground.
Strong words of great regret and victimization. Vivid imagery.
I like your use of spacing style with this poem. Helps with the cadance of reading it. Who are your favorite poets?
I don’t really have a favorite poet I like to read a lot of different kinds of books and poems
I hope you find peace, In sha Allah
Some strong words here with a lot of feeling. As sis nielouphar say I hope you find peace in sha Allah too
Wow this is so sad but so beautifully written!
Always touching words from this lovely lady!
Assalamu aleikum waramatulahi wabarakatuhu dear sister, beautiful poem Masha’Allah :). I sent you
a message on Instagram btw, did you get it? Wassalam xx π.
Wa Alikum Salam sister I’ll have to check instagram
Thank you.
Okie, Jazakh’Allah khair. Now, please send me your email address and postal mailing address at editor@djarabikitabs.com π xx
As Salam Alikum sister thanks for speaking about your pain and surviving as a victim it’s helpful to me , it shows me that I’ll be able to someday move past everything