In the cold pale morn
Her cold dead lips
She wasn’t in love
She never was
The death that took her was
Excrestionating
Doctors diagnosed
Depression
But that’s not
Why she died
She died
Despair
Loneliness
Because
No one cared
No one called
Her on the phone
She had no one
No one even
Knew where
She lived
At work
She was overlooked
The best in her field
No one
Noticed
Her friends
Shorn
Quit
Of
But
Cared
Or so they called
Themselves
Described her
As
Withdrawn
Quit
Shy
Soft-spoken
Very timid
Around guys
She died
Because
No one
Loved her
Her heart
Broke
Lack of
Affection
One day
From the lack of human contact
She decided
To disappear
What’s the use?
No one cares
She thought
All they do is
Give me abuse
Physical
Mental
Sexual
I get bullied
And harassed
At work some weirdo jerk grabs
The day she
Lack of love
No one noticed
See the empty shell
She was still
Alive to them
My ass
Died from
They didn’t
The distant look
No one realized
Until it was to late
By then she was gone
Gone was her
They didn’t
Realize
In her eyes
In it’s place
Was a blank
Smile
Her laugh
Sonic face
Dpressedmuslimah 
This is very beautiful. MaShaAllah!
Thanks
I can see the pain you’re communicating by writing this poem. Each line is very short, but I suppose that’s a deliberate choice you made regarding the way it is structured?
Yes when I wrote this I was in a lot of pain
oh my gosh, I literally was able to feel the pain of this person going through this trauma you have described so nicely. I have a tendency of feeling the pain and just diving in to the shoes of that person who someone either shares their painful experiences with me or if I read something involving pain or emotions. It really gets to me. Thanks for your effort in putting this together. 🙂
Welcome , it’s my personal experience with abuse and depression
Thank you for sharing such a personal struggle. Your words are powerful.
Welcome glad someone understands it
Wow, this was beautiful. Takes a lot of courage to express your struggles through creative expression or at all! Thanks for sharing.
Welcome glad you enjoyed it
This indeed came from deep within. May Allah make it easy. Ameen.
Amen
This is very powerful the way you have written in masha.Allah
Thanks
Beautifully expressed mashaAllah! Keep up the inspiring writing.
Thanks glad you enjoyed it
So sorry to hear , I can feel all the pain you’ve experienced through the words you have written, hope you are no longer in this pain.
Thanks, I am no longer in that situation and the pain has gone away
Oh these words are so powerful.
Hope everything is fine now!
According to me depression is no less than cancer,in both cases patient thinks that he is going to die soon & it hurts alot 😭
And the feeling that nobody cares is even worse,fear of that is always there.
May Allah help you in every situation ❤
Yes it’s better now
This was beautiful and painful to read. Thank you for sharing it with us, I hope the process was somewhat cathartic. Lots of duaa that Allah makes things easier for you inshaAllah x
Welcome, yes writing about it has helped a lot