Gone!

In the cold pale morn

Her cold dead lips

She wasn’t in love

She never was

The death that took her was

Excrestionating

Doctors diagnosed

Depression

But that’s not

Why she died

She died

Despair

Loneliness

Because

No one cared

No one called

Her on the phone

She had no one

No one even

Knew where

She lived

At work

She was overlooked

The best in her field

No one

Noticed

Her friends

Shorn

Quit

Of

But

Cared
Or so they called

Themselves

Described her

As

Withdrawn

Quit

Shy

Soft-spoken

Very timid

Around guys

She died

Because

No one

Loved her

Her heart

Broke

Lack of

Affection

One day

From the lack of human contact

She decided

To disappear

What’s the use?

No one cares

She thought

All they do is

Give me abuse

Physical

Mental

Sexual

I get bullied

And harassed

At work some weirdo jerk grabs

The day she

Lack of love

No one noticed

See the empty shell

She was still

Alive to them

My ass

Died from

They didn’t

The distant look

No one realized

Until it was to late

By then she was gone

Gone was her

They didn’t

Realize

In her eyes

In it’s place

Was a blank

Smile

Her laugh

Sonic face

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22 thoughts on “Gone!

  1. I can see the pain you’re communicating by writing this poem. Each line is very short, but I suppose that’s a deliberate choice you made regarding the way it is structured?

  2. oh my gosh, I literally was able to feel the pain of this person going through this trauma you have described so nicely. I have a tendency of feeling the pain and just diving in to the shoes of that person who someone either shares their painful experiences with me or if I read something involving pain or emotions. It really gets to me. Thanks for your effort in putting this together. 🙂

  3. Wow, this was beautiful. Takes a lot of courage to express your struggles through creative expression or at all! Thanks for sharing.

  4. Oh these words are so powerful.
    Hope everything is fine now!
    According to me depression is no less than cancer,in both cases patient thinks that he is going to die soon & it hurts alot 😭
    And the feeling that nobody cares is even worse,fear of that is always there.
    May Allah help you in every situation ❤

  5. This was beautiful and painful to read. Thank you for sharing it with us, I hope the process was somewhat cathartic. Lots of duaa that Allah makes things easier for you inshaAllah x

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